Come And Get Me

Do mine eyes deceive me? Or am I actually submitting this peice? I can't believe I'm truly finished with it! Well if I find anything wrong I'll update it later. Please, feel free to shower this pic with your comments and suggestions as I can use all the help I can find. Yes the face is a bit flat looking, got tired of working with it so I just added the shadows for the abs, legs and wrinkles to the tank top and submitted the darn thing. The pose is rather awful as well as the placement of the arms and fists. I was only looking for an excuse to put muscles on a Sonic-style character since most of the Sonic characters I see have noodles for arms and legs (no offense to you Sonic-style character owners. Here's the link to the sketch sheet, the final version is on the right. Please help me out with your comments and suggestions.